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Smile Majin Vegeta Drawing

This is the final version of a drawing of Majin Vegeta that I have been working on for a while. It was posted on my DevianArt profile but I had go back and finish touching up some things...Hope you guys like it!

BTW: this was done with colored pencils and art pens for anyone who cares.
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

Good job (Y)

But this is my opinion:

~ Hair appears to be too solid
~ Hairline is to plain
~ Needs enhanced shading in some areas

Still, you have potential =D
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

1. I def agree with you on the hair thing, but it was hard for me to make it look good by just varying the pencil pressure to make highlights. (kept getting the white patches across the surface, which I'm not a fan of)

2. What do you mean by hairline is to plain? Like, his hair appears to just jet out anywhere since it goes off the paper and there is no really definitive lines to suggest where it's going?

3. I'm an amateur so I got nothing on this one lol

Any advice on how to fix the problems in the pic? I would appreciate anything you or anyone else could suggest...
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

What type of art pencils do you use? 'Cause from what I see in the picture, it really looks like crayon xD
For the hairline, you just drew a plain line. Try adding the '^^^^^' pattern.
Other advice: Continue practice.
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

Crayon??? that bad huh? lol Actually they were Prismacolor colored pencils, and thanks for the tip!
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

Na, it's probably just my Asian eyes xD Also, when colour hair, try going with the gradient, just colour in the directional flow of the hair (if that makes sense)
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

hey pretty good majin pic i drew the same one a year ago
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

this could be horrible advice considering im no artist but maybe try outlining the character with black to let the line be more distinctive. but it looks good either way good job
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Default Re: Majin Vegeta Drawing

Awesome o_o With a bit more work it could be just as good as the original ^_^
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