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Default The curse of Torians

this is my first time with fan fictions, hope ya like it

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CHAPTER 1

He felt himself lying on a cold thing... maybe ...a table?... an ice berg? He didn't know for sure, but there was one thing : it was the coldest thing ever . He couldn't remember what happened to him, and why he couldn't even moved ..his head hurt , his muscles were like they were all paralyzed

He sensed some... people standing around him , he wasn't sure about this either , but he could hear them talking . Their voices sounded like some one was choking their throat . And their language , he had never heard before.

He forced his eyes to open < come on.... just...a little... >

As he could see something, he tried to focus on anything he saw . Everything were blurry and dark, there were indeed some figures standing around , looking down at him. One of them said something , then one of the figures standing on his left put it's cold and disguisting hand on him, whispered something , his body felt weaker...and weaker... until he couldn't control his eyes anymore, everything started fading...

darker ...

and darker....

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His eyes opened, clouds were floating slowly on the light purple sky . Wind flown through yellow leaves on the tree , through the tall grasses ,which looked more like spears growing from the ground, around him . He was wearing a battle armor, actually, it was what he wear everyday ; putting both his arms behind his head ,his eyes staring at the sky.

Suddenly, between the grasses, a rabbit-like creature , except it had red fur, 6 legs , 3 black eyes and a fox tail , The rabrut ran fast out of it's nest underground . He lazily rolled his eyes to focus it , today's meal had been decided .And with a blink of an eye

*BLASTING SOUND*

The poor creature laid dead on the ground, it was toasted . He stood up with a bored face, killing a little animal would never made him feel good. Even if he killed a thousand of those things . He wagged his tail while walking toward the toasted rabrut . But before he could pick it up, 2 figures jumped fast and stole it from him. He was so surprised , but was also conscious enough to jump one step backward and stood in his fighting stance. he turned on his scouter , it beeped and two familiar power level appeared on it. But that only made him angrier .

One of the figures , who was holding his meal , laughed " hahahahahah , Raditz~! you are as pathetic as always "

The other one , who is a very tall and muscled , also laughed along " Vegeta , we ought ta do that again ! "

" shut it , Nappa, who said you can speak ?! " Vegeta snapped at the tall saiyan .

Raditz growled . he had known those two for a very long time, they had been comrades since they were teenage. Well, actually only him and Vegeta were at teen age. Nappa was an aldult , basically, Nappa was the best example for a saiyan : tall, muscled , impatient, no brains, and probably many other things that Raditz never wished to know. It was kinda sucks that such a huge saiyan like Nappa and him had to obey Vegeta, the shortest in his gang. But it can't be helped. Vegeta was too strong , and he also was the prince of all saiyans, well, at least until Vegeta-sei was destroyed. Nappa also realized that, so he decided to blindy follow every single order Vegeta would give him, and bully Raditz . But Raditz is different, he decide his own path , yet he still obeying Vegeta, or else ...

But they stole his meal, it wasn't hard to get, but he had been very starving , the last time he ate something was a week ago.Why? BECAUSE THOSE BADSTARDS ALWAYS STEAL HIS FOOD ! He thought he was lonely out here since they had missions , he was wrooooong , so damn wroooong .

" why are you here?! " he frowned " AND GIVE ME BACK MY LUNCH !!! "

" this is your lunch? don't make me laugh again , then why it wasn't in your hand " Vegeta mocked while swinging the rabrut left to right in front of Raditz.

The long haired saiyan gulped to prevent himself from drooling . He then charged at Vegeta , but as always, he was kicked away . His body smashed hard on the ground , damn that kick on the face was so hard , he grinded his teeth .

" fine! have it ! " He shouted as he stood up and spitted out blood from his mouth , quickly regained his cool.

Vegeta's face turned serious, he threw the creature aside . " Frieza gave us new mission . "

The speaking of Frieza destroyed the good atmosphere they were having . Frieza, the ruthless thing that called himself the garlactic overlord ( say that with funny voice XD ) that they have to obey . It brought them the gross just by thinking of that lizard .

" what is it? " Nappa grinned , oh yes, he loves missions

" as usual, take over a planet , this time is one called Toria . According the information i got , it's will take at least 1 month " Vegeta sat down on a rock behind him " and it's very large. So we must split up when we get there, to make things faster . I don't want to hear any ****ing complain or mocking about timing from that lizard and those two with him. "

" Are you sure? i don't think our little crying-baby Raditz will agree to go alooone " Nappa grinned while saying with amusing voice

Raditz grunted " you said it will take 1 month, then why not get your butts to the ships now!? " He ignored his screaming-for-food stomach , he wasn't in the mood to eat after they made fun of him anyway. He walked without waitng for the others .

Vegeta was surprised, Nappa was always the one who never wait, he chuckled and also stood up .

After a while, 3 space pods flew out of the planet's atmosphere.....
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