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Unread 10-09-2009, 02:27 PM
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Post Poetry on the wall by Tupac

Welcome to the Jungle

As i stand in this concrete jungle
Seas of humanity spread out before me
People lost in life's hustle and bustle
Here,i lost my feeling of being free

No waves,no words to the fellow man
Everywhere i turn i bump into another
Insignificant is me,like a grain of sand
As i struggle to break free,confusions grips harder

Metal instead of wood,buildings as the trees
This jungle is my circle of negativity
Trap in a cell,searching for the keys
I want to run from here, to escape from reality

I began to yearn for a quieter place
Somewhere to be at peace
To feel again mother nature's embrace
As soothing as a mother's kiss



I am not much of a writer or poet but i was inspired to write this by reading the various works posted at this site.
So if its not any good,i apologize and thanks for reading
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yay! I can be the first to comment! Whooo! haha xD

Good poem tupac ^-^ Keep the good work up *thumbs up*
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its beautiful niisan ^_^ i can feel your emotions
just by reading it ^_^m

job well done
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wow...nice insight and use of words u got there...^^
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Indeed. You certainly have your own style with words. It's definitely a good read. It spoke to me. To break free from the cage of urban society is definitely something that screams "Romanticism" to me.
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hahaha!bravo tupac!!!
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And you said you weren't much of a writer. That's like saying that you don't drink coffee.
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yay! I can be the first to comment! Whooo! haha xD

Good poem tupac ^-^ Keep the good work up *thumbs up*


Thanks a lot missy89.....

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its beautiful niisan ^_^ i can feel your emotions
just by reading it ^_^m

job well done


Thanks imouto-san,means a lot to me that you like it.

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quote=Ciel Von Clide;160545]wow...nice insight and use of words u got there...^^[/quote]]


I did try my best not to bring shame on the rest of you guys.Glad You like it ciel.

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quote=Ash: the Angel of Battle;161164]Indeed. You certainly have your own style with words. It's definitely a good read. It spoke to me. To break free from the cage of urban society is definitely something that screams "Romanticism" to me.[/quote]]


Thanks for the heads up ash,means a lot coming fron a talented guy like you.

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hahaha!bravo tupac!!!
good work!^^


Encore sakura?hahahaha thanks...i am flattered...

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And you said you weren't much of a writer. That's like saying that you don't drink coffee.


I am not! really!i was half expecting bad stuff to be said about this poetry.
But i love my coffee thats for sure.Thanks for the vote of confidence pebbles..
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I think you wrote a very strong poem. I love the emotion and feeling in it. I like the way you chose the bright red to write it in, the colour of life. Awesome that our site and other members works inspired you. nice one.
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Ah, I liked it. Especially the descriptions you gave. It was nice.
Can't wait for more. ^^
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