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Default [5th]-C-Ichigo AF Poetry Competition Nov, Dec, Jan, 2012

Poetry Competition

This months competition is open to members and staff.

This months subject is: any

To enter:
1. Post your poem here in this thread.
2. Post the link to poetry or writing thread here too {only needed to qualify to enter} You can make a thread in the
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3. All poems must be your own work.

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Official AF competition with prizes. If there are over 10 entrants, the Prizes are to be "sparkly user name graphic".
If there are over 20 entrants, there will be a 2nd and 3rd prizes with color and no sparkle.
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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November 2011

My entry. Let's go.

Loner

I live alone, the silence is my company
Wherever I go, it makes sure to come with me
The walls are a friend
That I see time and time again
Just like the floors
They'll be with me until the end
The rooms are all empty
But they have sympathy
They provide comfort, they provide energy
The energy I need to make it through another day
Another day of nothingness, Another day of nay


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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November 2011

Here's what I got.
Link: http://animeforum.org.uk/showthread....32#post1197932
Was written for my twin sister wedding. I had the honor to be the one to give her away since father and grandfather both passed away years ago.

Here it is.
Written February 14th 2010
For- Ramona Waller.
-Wedding Poem-
Song to play on Father/Daughter Danceance with my Father- Luther Vandross

Dad'sEyes

I've wrote a poem as a son,
I've wrote a poem as a brother,
I've wrote poems for fun,
Even wrote them as a lover.
But Never have I wrote one, As a Father
I Can't replace our Dad.
Couldn't even if I gave all I had.
His love was so great,
Never knowing want or care.
Seeing you today,
Lets me know he's still there
He's watches over you every day
Only I know how bad he wants to stay
Today, the day of happiness for you
Your life that you start a-new
I'm Sorry he's not here for this
It's something he never meant to miss
I'll let you in on a little secret..
It's not just me here with you on this floor
We give you away, our little girl no more
Today surrounded by your beauty,
your brand new life, with no more lies
I see you Today....through Dad's eyes..




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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November 2011

PAN
she raced down the street
as he chased her
her energy low
his energy high

her life slipping away
she kept running
17 gaining speed
pan loosing speed

she used her telepathy
to send a cry for help
hoping it reached gohan
before all hope was lost

it reached gohan
in a matter of seconds
he raced outside
looking for his daughter

gohan saw her
in the distance
he saw her life
slipping through his fingers

it happened so fast
gohan couldnt believe it
pan knew she was going to die
no matter what

she tripped and couldnt
get up. gohan raced
towards her
hoping he'd get there first

17 got there before gohan
he punched her in the back
she coughed up blood
and lay there

gohan's eyes widenedwith
fear "PAN!" he scramed
gohan reached her
and punched 17 away

gohan picked up his daughter
and flew away fast
he had to get her to
safety and fast

as gohan came inside
he didnt hear his daughter's
breath
"no" he mouthed
he wasnt believing it

his heart turned to stone
as tears welled in his eyes
she was gone
and the tears flowed



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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November/December 2011

Great poems so far. To be continued another month!
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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November/December 2011

My peom and link http://www.animeforum.org.uk/showthread.php?t=20493



I told that I was greatd same time with universe.
But I wasent like this then.
I was spirit only power with mind and thoughts.
And I was lonely in cold space.
So I looked for planet who got eaven little life so I found Earth.
And sow that here was little life only bacteria but still life so I wated and watched when life groved and get more stronger.
When first human borned I taked form trying to mimic it so well as I gould but you can see it did not goed so well.
But I gould not try again I losted my powers when I taked form and I never can turn back.
I'm only immortal greature trapped by it self on this beautiful planet. And when times are gone I still be here alone again but this time I can't run to find new.
And I can't kill my self to find freedom.
My story is sad and I can't live with it.
I have never lived and never will.
I was never born I have not mother or father to take care of me.
Ones I was in love but she died long time ago and I evary day brought roses to her grave.
But time destroyed it slowly and it was gone.
No more roses to pick up and no place to brought them.
I cryed so long time years I spended time in dark cave trying to kill my self.
Then I sow her as beautiful she was.
She told that she was spoken to great spirits and they was gived me a mission to protect everything what was good.
I was doing that mission long time I sow empires grow and fall around me.
I did not see good in human and hated my self pecourse I wanted to be one.
I killed great king and destroyed my mission.
I traveled to desert hoping sun would burn me.
And it did evary day I burned but I did not die.
I losted my heart and when I was looking for itI one night looked up and sow stars.
They was my brothers and sisters and I was rejected them now they looked down cold as ice and cursed my name over again.

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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November/December 2011

Ship Of Love

I used to be your Rose...
You were my Jack...
Where are those days gone?
All there is left is the sinking ship of our love

The ship...

Our ship...

Just like the titanic
The sparks that flew
Which reciprocated the heat of our passion....
are no more, my love...

The hands that held me tight
The lips that whispered the promises....
are no more, my love...

Dreams...
That were burnt to ashes
Feelings...
Which turned into ice
lay in the sinking ship of our love

The ship..
The ship of our love...
The ship of our life...
have wrecked, my love

Diving into the ice cold water
Finding the lost emotions...
Sinking into the vast deep ocean
Are the sweet memories...
of our deep passionate love

The passions...
The emotions...
Lost in the darkness of betrayal
I want to feel them again, my love.....

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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November/December 2011

Here's my entry!

TO XE'MATHIR ERANUS, OR XEMNAS

My dear brother, my other half,
How long has it been since you left our home?
Three years tops, I believe.
I haven't even heard a single breath from you
Ever since father disowned you;
Cast you away from the family that night.

I do not know why I wrote this letter to you
When I know not of your whereabouts.
Perhaps it is because I feel I need to connect
With you, perhaps I desired to release this growing tension
That has been housing in my heart for so long
Due to the growing loneliness I am forced to face.

Do not forget; we we inseparable.

Xemnas,
Some things may not be what we expected.
We cannot progress in this world thinking
Everything will go our way.
This is a mistake you, and I, and father, had made that night
And that night the Fates had laughed at us
Triumphing at last.
We've become a mockery to them.
If you can even FEEL these words in
The deepest core of your heart as I write this,
I just wanted to let you know
That we cannot delay
Or challenge what Fate has laid down for us.
It is simply not in our jurisdiction.

My dear brother,
Do not forget who you are
Or the family in which you were born.
If only you knew, what has become of the family today.
Father misses you. Every day he looks into the eyes
of you, the eyes photographed perfectly in your portraits
Every day he talked about how he regretted casting you away
That it was not your fault
That it was an error in his ways.
Me? I am doing perfectly fine. But I feel
That I've been missing something
Like a part of me has been brutally pried away from me.
Maybe it was you.

Xemnas,
If you can even feel the pressure of this pen
As I write down all that has been kept in my heart,
Please return. We've missed you.
We want you back.

Yours sincerely,
Your twin brother Anselminus (Ansem).


Link to my poetry thread: Syn and her Poetry
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Default Re: AF Poetry Competition November/December 2011

My entry:
http://animeforum.org.uk/showthread....98#post1244598


Poetic Story

I stand there just looking around,
All alone, not even a sound.
Wishing, just wishing to be found.

Nothing here, just this emptiness,
For I am lost in this abyss.
Am I just imagining this?

Out of nowhere you come for me.
From the shadows, I didn’t even see.
I ask, “Why does thou come to thee?”

He replied, “I heard thee weeping.”
“There is error in your thinking,”
I replied to him not blinking.

He told me it was not out loud,
But in my mind, sadness I did shroud.
After, he looked at me and bowed.

“You must be mistaken,” I said,
“How could one hear inside my head?”
He replied, “I heard and just read.”

“I believe my thoughts are not those,
For my mind, I’m sure I did close.
But, from you, suspicion arose.”

He looked at me very calmly,
“What caused this suspicion of me?
I mean no harm as you can see.”

“How did you know that I was here?
Normally thy form would cause fear,
For I was alone then you came near.

From where you came, I do not know.
Your intentions, you do not show.
So stranger, are you friend or foe?”

He glanced at me and smiled sweetly.
“I am what you will make of me.
I’m not a foe as you can see.


I heard thee weeping so alone,
Your heartbroken feelings were shown.
To your aid I have quickly flown.”

“You say that you have flown my way,
If there is truth in what you say,
Will my life be taken this day?”

Then he disappeared from my sight,
In the air, he had took to flight.
In my ear, he did say, “It might.”

I stood there, not moving an inch,
With his grip, my arm he did pinch.
T’was hard enough to make me flinch.

“Did I hurt you my dear?” He said.
I spoke, “If you did, you’d be dead.”
With that he laughed, as my arm bled.

Up to his lips, he moved his hand.
“You will live, for your blood is bland,
You have no life, on which to stand.”

I turned at him with a mean glance,
So quick he moved, as if a dance.
I could not see, I had no chance.

“Why is it you do not fear me?
I can take your life so quickly.
Why do you make this so easy?”

“You said in me there was no life,
My soul is filled with only strife.
It can be ended by a knife.”

He sits on the ground, just watching.
Eyes on me, as if we’re touching.
He was looking at me, waiting.

Soon the sun begins to come up,
When he saw, he left so abrupt.
Next night, I was back like a pup.

I sat there, waiting to see him.
No thoughts in my head, just a whim.
He was not there, my soul grew grim.

Over and over I came back.
Some nights where it was so pitch black,
The only noise was a branch crack.

One night I felt eyes watching me,
But no figure that I could see.
Then I fell asleep at a tree.

Later that night I saw him there,
Looking at me with a slight stare.
It looked like concern, which is rare.


I stared right back into his eyes,
Back at him I looked with surprise.
“All these nights I have heard your cries.

I stood and watched you on these nights,
Hoping you would put up a fight.
Standing, just thinking that you might.

Why do you willingly come here?
You know what I am! Have you fear?!
Is what I am, not to thee clear?”

Still staring at him I replied,
“I know what you are, and I’ve tried,
Death, that is what my heart has cried.

You offered that to me that day,
For that offer, my blood I pay,
Or is this just a game you play?”

He stood puzzled, looking at me,
I kept staring, what did he see?
What about him made me not flee?

“Odd you are, to say in the least.
But upon you, I dare not feast.
But a taste, upon thy sweet wrist?”

It was strange that which he had asked,
In the moonlight, we sat and basked,
Any ill intentions were masked.

To his lips, my wrist so gently,
With loving eyes he looked at me,
Then he said so sincerely,

“I refuse to bite you my dear,
Intriguing is your lack of fear,
And at your death, you shed no tear.

You stir my curiosity,
As I see, yours is stirred by me,
Or you wouldn’t come back to see.

Am I not right in my thinking?”
Then he smiled at me winking,
Shocked I sat not even blinking.

Many nights I came back to talk,
Others we just went for a walk.
T’was each other that we did stalk.

For we enjoyed our company,
Getting to talk so secretly,
And we did talk, quite frequently.

Until one day, something happened.
He looked at me and I reddened.
I blushed, only noise was the wind.

“Why is your heart beating faster?
Were you bewitched by some caster?
Such a drastic change in color.”

He put his hand up to my cheek.
Beating so fast, I couldn’t speak.
Suddenly, life was not so bleak.

I could tell I was in love,
With my angel who’s from above.
He said, “What are you thinking of?

Your mind seems to be full of thoughts,
Also, you have been blushing lots.”
I sat there my stomach in knots,

Did he know what I was thinking?
All my courage in me shrinking,
Then he looked at me just winking.

“I can hear what is in your head,
It explains why your face turned red.”
I sat and laughed at what he said.

I got up and had walked away,
He stopped me from going astray,
He looked at me and said, “Please stay.”

“Why should I stay?” I looked and asked,
“You know that I am not ill tasked,
And do not hide behind a mask.

Why does thee walk away from me?
What have I done, I do not see.
I hope I never make you flee.”

He held me close, I felt so warm.
My feelings wild as a swarm.
This was extremely out of norm.

How could I have feelings for him?
A being said to be so grim,
Who has my heart with just a whim?

He looked at me with his cold eyes,
A pretty blue, just like the skies.
Then I did smile to his surprise.

“How does thee smile, so easily,
When thou is looking right at me?”
I replied, still smiling you see.



“I can’t help but smile at thee,
For all these feelings you cause me.
I’m sure that they are plain to see.”

He sweetly looked and smiled back,
“Most of them plain, like white and black.
Clarity of some, I do lack.



Those you could help me understand.”
At that moment, I took his hand,
A kiss on his lips I did land.

Uncontrollably I did blush,
Then color from my face did flush.
An excuse I had tried to rush.

“I didn’t mean to…” I stuttered,
My heart beat loud, I’m sure he heard.
I tried to say another word.

But all I said was jumbled up,
Everything I said was abrupt,
Then my cheek he softly did cup.

He so very sweetly kissed me,
As we both laid against that tree.
It was all done so perfectly.

We smiled at one another,
So happy we’re with the other.
We stayed all night, with each other.
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That is a long poem, you must have worked really hard. well done. Thanks for all the wonderful entries so far. Hopefully we can get a few more before the time runs out.
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