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Lightbulb Wevenger: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

A Taste of Summer -
Poetry Competition.
July 2009

Please enter this competition.The more that enter the more fun it is.
Its a great theme and you can make a very nice entry.

We are looking for people to write a poem that is rhyming or non rhyming

No longer than one side of A4 paper and try to break the poem up into verses to make it easier to read.

You have from now until 30th July to put in your entry and we will close the competition on that day and judge it by using a poll.The poll will be up for seven days and we will announce the winner on the 7th Aug 2009.
( We have found this to be the fairest way to judge a competition so far.)

Make sure the entry is typed up and you can add a picture to enhance your entry if you wish.

Get writing and make some magic!

Entries to go in this thread, please.

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Competition re- opened.

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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

here is my entry



Summer season brings
Colors to the face of earth
As season's birds sings

Summer season is
Warmest of all the seasons
Weaving dreams of bliss

Season of summer
Fills heart and soul with laughter
Like blooming flower

Summer brings shimmer
By benevolence of nature
In beams of glimmer

Summer's arrival
Signals fun and festivals
And soul's revival

Summer is warmer
Shining brighter is the sun
Solace is water

Summer's diverse sounds
Is the nature's symphony
Without doubt astounds

Summer is the best
To feel the comfort of breeze
Which needs no attest

Summer is the peak
For the soul of sun to shine
And it is unique

Summer is for fun
Soaking in sweat and water
And is never done

Summer holidays
Sprinkles delight everywhere
In so many ways

Summer is the time
To think of spring and autumn
As it is sublime
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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

here's mine,.

Summer love

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Summer is a wonderful time
where you escape your grief
you can travel many places
beyond your wildest belief.



This summer when i went away
i expected nothing new
just the same old summer
nothing to turn me blue.



But when i first saw you
i did the 'double-take'
because you took my breath away
i knew this summer wasn't fake.



Over the two month summer
you became a really good friend
and as much as i resented it
i knew summer had to end



So you went your own way
and i took off in mine
you were my first love
and we would be just fine



Summer love never lasts
it's sad in all its perfection
so i'll look back on what we had
and know it wasn't rejection


so a place in my heart which you will stay
where i will love you eternally
i know what we had was special
although it was only a summer love..
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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

Please vote now for the winner of the competition.

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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

They were both very good! but i think Wevenger just takes it, for me
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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

I liked Wevengers I liked the first poem but Wevenger's I could relate to more.
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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

they were both really good and there were high points 2 both, but wevenger's is better 4 me. I like the meaning behind it and it's easier 2 understand. ^^ good job 2 both!
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Default Re: A Taste of Summer - Poetry competition. June 2009

Both are written beautifully, but I think, being a teenager, I can relate to wevenger's poem more.
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wevenger's poem was better in my opinion. it has a story, it has emotion, and it just attracted me more than the other.
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