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Demon's Circle An Exorcist

One freezing frost bit December night in the middle of the forest on a island In between the great lakes. A cult of demon summoners gathered to have a child birth from the 2 leaders of the cult. A child was born they named him Sixx he had no last name because everyone in this clan's name was Sixx because they were born within one mother. They raised him like a normal child intil he was 13 years old. They brought him to a meeting and summoned a demon of a dead women's soul that had been eaten. The demon screeched in Pain with a ear bleeding tone " WHY AM I HERE THIS WAY WHY"" Sixx was horrified he disapproved of this very much he suffered through that summoning but, on his way home he tripped an fell.He looked on the ground to see he had tripped over a muddied up book and a necklace with a cross.He Picked up the book cleaning it off "Holy Bible" The book read he had never heard of it.His parents never told him of any religon at all see he didn't know.He took the book home and read it to keep his mind away from the demon he turned 15 he always wore the cross around his neck. After a meeting Sixx had skipped his mother and father walked in on him reading the Bible. They grabbed his arm taking away the book and throwing it in the dirt. "What's wrong with you" They said "That book is true" He commanded to his evil parents They then slammed his door shut on his paintless wooden room.Sixx then woke up to his parents stabbing him in his chest.He felt no pain... The knife flew through the air suddenly sticking into the wall. A deep voice echoed through "YOU SHALL NOT HURT THIS CHILD" It said Sixx's parents were shocked "THERE IS NO GOD"Sixx's parent's screamed in unison. Sixx then got up and ran out his window Running over thick bush and tree. He got stuck by thorns but didn't care he ran intil he got to the lake. His parents had cornered him "No one will save you now" His mother said pulling out a butcher's knife. Sixx then turned to the lake he was gonna swim for it. Then a golden bridge appears Sixx runs across his mother follows shortly behind but when Sixx reaches dry land the bridge vanishes and his mother falls in the water.Sixx ran intil he found the statue of liberty he then changed his name to Christan Sixx.
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Im liking it so far.

Are you a christian?
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Yeahh I amm I'm not like a holy roller or anything.Lol I just thought of this idea
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Demon's Circle: Chapter 1 The Academy
After Five years of living in New York away from his Mother and Father .Chirstan had been studying on Demonology and Law.Christan had been living a normal life learning about what the demons he saw were.He was going to be a lawyer in til one day he was walking by to his office. A demon ran him into an alley corner. It was 7 foot tall with razor sharp fangs and and black claws. It backed him against a brick wall and tried to choke him. Christan ripped his hand away and threw daggers at him stabbing him numerous times. The demon cried and roared "YOU WILL DIE" It forced out of his mouth. It slashed Christan's chest opening various wounds that were around four inches deep.Christan hit the demon but to no affect.The demon used it's claws to rip a hole in dimensions. It grabbed Christan crushing his bones It was going to throw him into the hole but, then 6 bullet holes appeared in it's back. A man with long sliver flowing hair and Coat made of cloth."Kid" The man said "Would you like to be a exorcist ?" Christan was sort of confused but, very relived "Yes" He told the man "Well then follow me and the name's Karah." The man opened a portal and walked in with Christan following him in. When he went into the building it was a a glass sky scrapper "This is the Academy" Karah said "This is where you will learn to become an exorcist but, first we will heal your wounds" Karah walked in and shouted "Medic, this boy was attacked he will become and exorcist afterwards so show him to the corridor after his wounds heal" A Medic comes out and takes him to a room to treat his injures.
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I like this. However, im getting a feeling that you rushed this one?

Me too, but it comes and goes lol
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Well I kinda had this one already in my head so this part is the only part that'll have that feel
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Ah ok.

I am liking it, it has a nice plot xD
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Demon's Circle 2: Breakage on the 3rd Floor
"]Christan woke up to a stitched up face and broken ankle.He was in a lot of pain despite his excitement for becoming an exorcist.He was in a hospital bed in a white room with many questionable tools.A man wearing a small brown beard and a white coat came into the room.His coat had many blood splatters and stains.He took of his rubber gloves laid them on the tray next to Christan and said "Your surgery was a great one" He nudged Christan "Seemed like you were mad sometime in the middle you put up quite a fight intil we knocked you out" The man laughing reaching for Christam's hand to shake"Iv'e heard great things about you from Karah Iv'e never seen him make such fuss over a newcome in the 5 years Iv'e known him and The name's Dr.Harold." A young girl with blonde hair and blue coat walks into the room and smiles "You must be Christan" she says "My name is Kella I'm your watcher" she showed Christan her badge and explained to him that a watcher is a guardian for all new-coming exorcists."Hopefully you won't get yourself into much trouble before you know how to get out of it" She laughs laying a coat,badge,gun, and cross for Christan when he heals."Your recovery will happen shortly just a few more days" Dr.Harold said All of a sudden a big crash goes down and Karah barges in screaming "Demon Breakage from a cleansing patient on floor 3 we need all the help we can get." Karah left with Kella to follow him they ran up 3 flights of steps to a black and red demon with sharp fangs and long spiked tail.Karah raised his sword and shoot out slashes of light at the demon.They were no good it brushed off the side grabbing Kella and pushing her against the wall. Karah grabbed his gun and shot it five times in the back but, the bullet holes just healed up as he threw Kella now after Karah.Kella reached in her bag and pulled out a katana with gleaming solid gold blade of purity.She stuck it threw the demon making it's particles go apart from each other and the demon burst into a bloody mess. "Wow" Karah said "I didn't expect all of that" He ran over to Kella and said "You've improved greatly"
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I must say you lost me at the beginning, with the surgery, but its deufloping well xD
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