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Transparent Force

Through dark clouds and thickening fog,
I see a sight no one else could behold:
Ghostly in appearance,
I followed it.

It lead me to a place with light and scene,
A place glistening with new life.
Hoping for more.
I followed it.

This transparent force lay deep in my soul,
Taking me to new found heights,
Everyday,
Every night.
I keep this transparent force as my consul,
Tracking my thoughts and plights,
Every night,
Everyday.
With this transparent force I feel happy, I feel bold,
Now even my pain has gone away,
Everyday,
Every night.
Now this transparent force I can no longer hold,
It flies away just like a kite.
Every night.
Everyday.

I'm back in my human-bound reality,
Opaque to society.
Needing it no more,
I left it.

No more adventures for me,
I'm happily back in reality.
Feeling it no more,
I left it.

That transparent force is gone,
Gone with all winds.
Doleful nevermore,
I left it.

I left it for another...
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Woah...this is excellent!
A very deep and flowing poem.
I see you have entered the poetry contest so good luck in it Jamahiraya.
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Woah...this is excellent!
A very deep and flowing poem.
I see you have entered the poetry contest so good luck in it Jamahiraya.
I had a couple others, but this one was the only I felt could win a competition.
Thank you for your wonderful comments :3
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I had a couple others, but this one was the only I felt could win a competition.
Thank you for your wonderful comments :3
I hope you post up the others so that we can read those as well.
Its my pleasure,i should be thanking you for sharing such wonderful poetry.
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