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this is for the competition
Beautiful Snow


It is yet a winters day,

with lots of snow falling into place..

there's no one around its quite and free,

oh how I wish you were here with me.

The nights sky is filled with stars,

it so clear i can see mars..

There's just nothing more beautiful then this right know,

oh how i wish i can share this somehow ..

but that's alright because i know that your somewhere enjoying the

beautiful snow..
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Great poem JenieD i hope it does well in the competion and hope to see more from you
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that you ... i will sometime soon i guess.......
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Nice!
Good luck in the competition and hope you write up some more poetry.
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Nice work JenieD. I can see you have worked really hard to convey your subject and make wonderful descriptions of the snow. Great to read.
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Nice!
Good luck in the competition and hope you write up some more poetry.
thank you ........ you do awesome at poems

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Nice work JenieD. I can see you have worked really hard to convey your subject and make wonderful descriptions of the snow. Great to read.
thank you ... yes it took me a while to make....^^)
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Very nice poem Jenie!
Never thought I was going to see some writing from you - I'm really surprised. In the good way that is ^_^
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heres another ......

A woman sits there staring in the mirror,
her face is just full of fear..
She try's to hold back the tears she has,
and hope that her man will come back..
She thanks of all the good hes done,
and knows that there is no better captain..
When that day finally comes,
she has notice the man he has become..
With his uniform torn,
from this long war..
Shes just glad that hes home,
safe and warm...

sorry no name yet....



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Another great poem JenieD hope to see more soon
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Nice!
Simple and yet deep.
Your captured the essence of a longing woman and potraited it splendidly.
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